[Story] Rioneed : VRMMORPG

Title: Rioneed : VRMMORPG
Author: ranmaro
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags: Virtual Reality, System, Reincarnation, Kingdom Building, Action, Game Elements, Necromancer, Time and Space Travel, Science Fiction
Audience: –
Main Lead: Male
Status: Complete
VB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 2 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 1 || Overall: 9
Number of Chapters: 452
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: February 24, 2020
Date of Last Update: June 30, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 1M
Number of Reviews: 59
Synopsis:
“A fallen hero will be a legend if he got a chance to live his life again.” -Ibro.
Ibro was the hero humanity waited for… a necromancer, but he was betrayed. In a world full of demons, monsters, and gods, humans were the weakest chain. Ibro was their hero, but he -alone- wasn’t enough. After Ibro’s defeat, he was judged to enter reincarnation to save himself and humanity.
Without his memories, losing his powers, and being alone with no aide or friends, Ibro started his journey to rise again. At the low Earth realm, Ibro reincarnated 4 times in a row and failed. Now, he will start his 5th and last reincarnation chance.
Follow Ibro in his epic journey to rise from ashes and reach the heavens.

Review(s)

ReaderLove: This novel is amazing after the character development. As during the character development, the main character is a idiot that does very dumb stuff like destroying your beginner village due to anger. The beginning of the story, make you want to kill the MC due to his lack of knowledge even though he had 10 years of experience in that game. Even if he gained only some of that knowledge that should be at least 5% to 50% of his previous experience. But he still did retard stuff that got him rekted in the beginning of the story. After the beginning, the novel get interesting as this become a novel about a world inside a world inside a virtual reality game world inside a world. Basically this novel is a world inception. I believe this novel would be one of a kind novel as long as the novel continued to improve and developed. This novel will fail, if the author all of a sudden had the knowledge of a kid because the novel them have horrible grammar and updates. As kids usually are random and have bad grammar.

Jin_Daoran: Excellent beginning – interesting worldbuilding, immediate ten.sio.n, a race against time! A VR game used to invade other countries. Do I hear echoes of Ender’s Game? I’d like to hear how a VR game invasion managed to make it into RL. 
The MC is racing to get strong enough to beat an invasion of VR players on his country. But then, things get more complicated, and matters appear that are greater than the fate of a single country or a single person. 
This novel has layered mysteries, and the MC traveling back in time to participate in a VR game that destroyed countries is just the beginning. I read the brain journey thing and went ah, is this going to be like Knowhere? Unfortunately it wasn’t and I stopped reading. I wrote this review instead, haha! 
As for the MC, Ibrahim is the determined sort of person. He’s definitely the kind hero type, not a trash MC. There’s not a lot of character development at first; it is the plot that keeps the story moving forward in the first several volumes. 
Minor problems in formatting – capitalization and punctuation mostly. Could be ignored, and it gets better, but there’s a lot in the beginning. 
Still, I definitely recommend this novel. Great read!

Story Post Last Updated: December 18, 2020