[Story] The Damn Hunter

Title: The Damn Hunter
Author: Good_Light_Sleep (formerly little_box)
Genre(s): Martial Arts
Tags: Modern, Adventure, Action, Comedy, Light Romance, Hunting, Monsters
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1   CDD 1   SWB 2   || TQ 2   SV 1   ||  Overall: 7
Number of Chapters: 69
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: November 6, 2018
Date of Last Update: September 6, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 122.6K
Number of Reviews: 11
Synopsis:
Yang Guang is the last hunter protecting his city from The Damn, creatures from another universe aiming to harm humans to strengthen themselves but the damn are not the only problems that Yang Guang need to face as he ventures beyond the small city into the world and discover a secret that should not be reveal for another two thousand years.

Review(s)

yunisao: I enjoyed reading this novel! It has a good concept and interesting plot. I do think there are some things that could be better like grammar. Also the flow of events could have better transitions. But you can tell the author is working hard on improving their writing as you read along.

PeachyPearl: It was intriguing from the beginning chapter itself. Action! Yup just my kind of thing. I’m really very happy to read and review your work. It’s just Mamamia!!!! Keep it coming. Feed me more.
Author, are you a magician? The scenes with detailed explanation just transmigrated me to your world. Haha. Loved it.
Not giving any spoilers so that your readers won’t pass from here itself and will read it.
Do read it people it’s worth your time.

PsyberRose: A story with a lot of potential. If you like demon hunter, an OP MC, a dorkable sidekick type of stories, then this is the one for you.
Writing Quality: It’s not bad, and it’s an easy read. 5* as Author is continuously improving and you can see that the quality between first chapter and later chapters have improved greatly..
Stability of Updates: 5* as author delivers as promised.
Story Development: It’s a good build-up. It’s not a ****** ‘hunt-bash’ type of story, as it also shows some human interaction of his daily life.
Character Design: 4* as there’s not much real description about the characters themselves. I can see their personalities but it feels a bit 2D to me due to the lack of description of emotions or things like that. So you can’t truly emphatize or bond with them.
World Background: 5* just cuz the damn are cute.
Keep on writing to fuel the passion!

dusty_angel: Review Swap! Sorry it took so long.
Writing: 4/5
Wow, nice writing! I barely saw any grammar slip ups, but a little proofreading could benefit the story. Also, great job keeping the tense consistent. It is rare to read a story in present tense. Sadly, its not really my cup of tea. I prefer stories told in the past tense, solely because I find it easier to read.
Update Stability: 5/5
No complaints here. I’m impressed you’ve been writing since last year!
Story Development: 4/5
The plot is interesting and has potential. I’m interested to see which direction the story is gonna go.
Character Design: 4/5
The MC can be a bit OP and his personality a bit arrogant, but I want to see how he will grow throughout the story. More imagery could be used to describe the characters though. There are a lot of names, but not enough description for me to imagine how they look.
World Background: 4/5
The world is interesting, but I’m curious, does this take place in modern times? Future? Where did these “Damn” come from? What are the Damn Hunters? I have a lot of questions about the world. More explanations would be helpful. Hopefully it will be described more as the story progresses.
Overall, this story has potential. Keep up the good work!

Story Post Last Updated: October 11, 2020

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