[Story] Devil’s Cold-Hearted Love

Title: Devil’s Cold-Hearted Love
Author: Tangent34
Genre(s): Contemporary Romance
Tags: Romance, Love, system, Cultivation, Action, Reincarnation, Fight, Adventure
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 2 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 10 (score explanation)
Number of Chapters: 168
Chapter Length: Short
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: December 2020
Date of Last Update: May 23, 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 280.8K
Number of Reviews: 13
A divine cultivator, who was cursed at the time of his birth to spend his second life as an Asur until he turns thirty. Unable to finish his cultivation to achieve immortality, he had died and took birth into an Asur clan in his second life. 
As an Asur, until and unless, his soul and body unites with a stronger witch, only then his curse will be triggered. 
However, the witch whom he abducts to torture and make her suffer, has actually been sent by the divines to help him out in cultivation as she is one of the stronger cultivator among the divines- the only female to have high cultivating strength. But ever since, she was under Bennett clan’s, her powers were blocked. 
She slowly starts to fall in love with the cold-hearted devil. He himself did not realize that a love seedling had sprouted in his heart until one day while he was forcing himself on her and torturing, she cried out. 
“I already gave you my heart and soul, do you still have to torture me?”


Jo_J: I would not like to delve into the content, nor do I want to judge it. I am not a fan of this type of literature, but I will try to be objective. I will evaluate the whole from the point of view of structure, etc. The cover page is original (it’s a part of success 😉 ) The storyline keeps well the reader’s attention, characters are expressive, dialogues are engaging, descriptions interesting. You don’t struggle, like most of us (non-English speaking) with tenses, style or grammar… so it’s a pleasure to read. I just don’t like the staff I already mentioned in comments. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas! All the best with the contest! I hope I helped a little.

Story Post Last Updated: May 23, 2021


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