[Story] Is always Happy After Ending?

Title: Is always Happy After Ending?
Author: Dream_land
Genre(s): Fantasy Romance
Tags: Reincarnation, R-18, Comedy, Romance, Revenge, Action, Love, Betrayal, Transmigration
Audience: G
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 2 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 1 || Overall: 8
Number of Chapters: 187
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: May 24, 2020
Date of Last Update: April 15, 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 253.5K
Number of Reviews: 29
Synopsis:
“Do you know why you are here? What brings you here?” The lifeless eyes of Aurora stared with a blank expression on her face as the lady circled around her.
“What is your wish? What does your heart desire, my child? Tell me about the beautiful voice that you have lost. Your sister took your voice due to envy,” She paused, now standing in front of Aurora.
“But you can get it back my child by stabbing her heart and wishing for what you desire the most.” She said, holding her face between her hands staring into her eyes.
“Not everyone is a saint here, there is always a demon hidden deep within your heart.” 
Every story has its own ending, some make you jump in joy, some leave you a sobbing mess, some make history and some leave you in a mystery but the question is, is it always happy after the ending?
‘Voice of love from the Sea’ had its own happy ending where the prince and the princess lived happily ever after. The princess becomes the queen and gives birth to a beautiful child.
This is the journey of a story after the ending where a character is meant to die by the betrayal of her own sister. 
The world of unknown where a reader transferred into the body of a character, the voice which has now lost its power. 
The world Daisy read is now going to be her life as Aurora, the side character of the book. The mystery which stayed in the dark will reveal now. 
The voice which made desires come true will now make your nightmares your reality. Will she gain it back or once again fall into the grave her sister has been digging for her?
Will it end with love or will it end in pain? The unacceptable ending.
Will you be the Saint or the Evil?
“You are just a tool to win the love of my life back, just a tool to play with. Even if you run away, I will find you from wherever you are until the time I get Zoe back for myself, even if it means I have to kill anyone,” he said, pushing me against the wall with a loud bang.
‘Can I just give this brat a whack on his head? This is the reason why this brat didn’t get the female lead’

Review(s)

MrCarbonite: First off you do have a good story line with a good set of characters. However, your tense work and your grammar could really use some work. For me it broke the immersion more than once. Maybe use spell check or grammarly. Personally I’m not a fan of text talk like tho. All in all a good book though that I can’t wait to read more of.

phoenixhyperion: First of all, I love how you describe your world background. It’s so detailed that induces us, readers, to picture out what the world really looks like in your story. The characters too, well portrayed if I may say. 
Now, for the critic, I’d rather suggest you proofread the chapters. The thought is there, the flow is there. But sometimes, these ideas are either chunk, misspelled, or unrelatedly joined together in a sentence which makes us, readers, confused. 
But, if you fix that, I’m sure this story will come out splendidly than it already is! I commend you for your work author! Great job!

varean: I sense that you are one imaginative person. As I read your first few chapters, I can see that you’re trying very hard to be as descriptive as possible. The amount of effort you put in this is commendable. Your novel seems very interesting too, I’m hooked. Though, we can’t deny that there are plenty of grammatical and spelling errors. Some paragraphs are just difficult to read because of the mistakes. If you have time, you should go back to your chapters and do a bit of editing here and there. If you do fix your errors then I know, your story will come to be wonderful. Good job to the author! Keep updating ❤

Story Post Last Updated: April 16, 2021

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