[Story] Maze of the Forgotten Masters

Title: Maze of the Forgotten Masters
Author: SeverusMagicus
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags: Action, Adventure, Magic
Audience: NC-17
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 1 SWB 1 || TQ 3 SV 1 || Overall: 8 (score explanation)
Number of Chapters: 63
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: February 2021
Date of Last Update: May 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 34.9K
Number of Reviews: 12
Before the maze was constructed, there was the ancient empires known with their magnificent powers.
When the ancient empires were being weakened day by day with their continuous wars between them, a man who called himself as dark emperor showed up and declared war to every empire.
Many empires and kingdoms fell in the wind of war that caused by the dark emperor.
While the hopes for the peace were almost lost, Forgotten Masters constructed a maze to protect people from the war of the ancient empires.
Maze succeed to protect the people from the war of the ancient empires and even from the dark emperor himself.
Years have passed but the history never changed.
When the people started a new war inside the maze, Arthur woke up in a dark dusty room and just managed to survive somehow but with a problem, who was Arthur?
This is the story of a man, who tries to learn his past while the bells of the war is ringing.


Jo_J: Wow!!! Stunning cover page! Very original and catchy. 
I miss in the synopsis a few more sentences (about the plot and the main character). 
From the beginning of the story, I can see that you have a concept for the whole plot, but inside there some things (like short explanations, descriptions that would give more light to the plot and characters, etc.) are missing. 
In general, you’re doing great!

Crackgear: This books has quite a stable unstable update when it comes to adding chapters, a flaw when it comes to super deatiled books. I can say the quality of writing is pretty good, especially the usages of proper grammar and vocabulary. Problem is the characters don’t have much of a perspective, no lore nor backstory, the characters are just placed there like from a writer’s view than a character’s view. Detailing is good when it comes to actions, emotions and expressing volume. Background is decent yet rather small for now, Can do better. With this I can say, this is impressive.
Keep up the good work ! 😀

Story Post Last Updated: July 20, 2021


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