Title: Make Your Wish.
Genre(s): Fantasy Romance
Tags: Action, Comedy, Fantasy, Magic, Transmigration, Romance, Western Fantasy (excludes some non-tags)
Main Lead: Female
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 2 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 10 (score explanation)
Number of Chapters: 125
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: 2019
Date of Last Update: July 1, 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 86.8K
Number of Reviews: 41
Luna isn’t just a simple girl. Others might perceive her as such but this book smart person is hiding something deep in her mind. She promised to hide it forever and lived as a normal person would but some force didn’t want to waste such talent.
One unlucky day, she found herself in a mysterious place untouched by the modern stuff she’s familiar with. The people wear weird clothes, the houses looked old-style, and everything is so simple.
It might look simple on the surface but that world had always been full of mysteries hidden deep within and waiting to be found.
The place is just like her.
She did her best to keep her secrets but the longer she lived there, the harder it is to hide her secrets in the dark.
“There’s no helping it, let’s just embrace the truth,” she uttered.
“Keep it easy, young lady,” a man in his deep, cold voice appeared behind.
“B-but get away from me”
Popsicle_Jellyfish: Ok, I absolutely loved the first few chapters of this book. I am trying to figure out how to add it to my library on my laptop. You just set a world where the reader can immerse, and feel like they are there with Luna. I found myself smiling at the little things in the very beginning. I hope that continues throughout this book. I’m a lover of little cliches! I’ve had to write many reviews, but this is definitely one of my favorite books I’ve read so far. Can’t wait to read more! Good luck dear author!
AmateurAuthor: This novel is awesome! The synopsis is very interesting. The language that the author used is also beautiful. I love how the author describes the characters’ interaction and world background. It felt like I was really there. I have been already hooked up after reading a few chapters and would like to find out more about the novel’s mysteries. I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author!
star_dreamer: The plot of this story is very intriguing while the author’s writing is quite engaging and descriptive. A good combination which makes this story a promising read.
There are many layers to the characters and the world which make the readers sit t the edge of their seats wanting to learn more, discover more.
Only thing is I found the shift in tenses in the writing a tad bit confusing and disorienting. With a bit of editing and polishing this story will certainly level up!
Good luck author!
Jenjibread: Overall really enjoyable read. There are some grammar mistakes, but it really doesn’t take away from the story itself.
I would say the main thing is that I didn’t get too much from the synopsis. It sort of made me feel that I should expect a meh novel, but the first line of your actual story was anything but that.
There are nice characters who seem dynamic enough, so even though some points in the story were a bit cliche for my liking, the characters themselves and the way you described the scenes pulled through.
MokouFriedChicken: Curioser, curioser.
Grammar could use some work, though it doesnt detract from the reading experience. Dialogue felt natural, but could use some spice through more descriptive writing. Same goes for prose. It felt kinda stiff; missing some much needed description and cadence. It felt like you’re telling a story, which is good, but showing the characters’ actions, cadence, or surroundings make for a better reading experience IMO.
Over all, a remarkable effort. Keep on writing, you’ll only improve more 👍
phoenixhyperion: What a mild and refreshing story to read. I like how you take things slowly then proceed to an unexpected twist. You have an interesting protagonist there author! She knows how to take care of herself, I like her!
But if I may suggest, I want you to be careful with your choice of word descriptions. Especially linking two or three ideas in one sentence. Instead of making things clearer, it sometimes got me off track or have my engagement reading vibe disrupted. I really like your plot so I boldly make this ssuggestion.
But I’m judging on the initial chapters though. Since its purely my opinion, you may take or ignore this advice, it’s up to you! Anyway, this book is already a job well done. Hands raised to you author! Keep up the good work!
Story Post Last Updated: July 1, 2021