[Story] On My Way: The Demon King Made Me His

Title: On My Way: The Demon King Made Me His
Author: Aaliyah_Stark_
Genre(s): Fantasy Romance
Tags: Mature, Romance, Reincarnation, Adventure, Action, Modern, System, Cultivation, Demon, Angel, RomCom, Royal, Fantasy
Audience: G
Main Lead: Female, Male
Status: Ongoing
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 2 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 10 (score explanation)
Number of Chapters: 185
Chapter Length: Short
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: October 2020
Date of Last Update: May 10, 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 323.8K
Number of Reviews: 66
The clash between the heaven and hell has been nonstop. The fine line between the life and death has been serious and invisible. The after life has always been feared. But little do the world know about the life of the immortals. The love that is forbidden, The price they pay to live and protect the galaxy. 
But will the Water Princess Aqua and Demon King Huo go through the same, inevitable and dangerous. What choices will they make? Will the live wisely ? 
He took the crown off her head and untied her hair that fell down to her shoulders. Aqua stood up and faced him. 
“It still feels like a dream, a distant dream that came true, us, without objections,” she said looking into his eyes. He stroked her hair and took her face in his hands. 
“We no longer will have hindrances, we will no longer have to hide, hurt, run away or die a second time, from the troubles,” he said to her. This time his eyes glistened with tears. He was happy, extremely. She reached up to his face and kissed him. Her thoughts were all about him. He lifted her in his arms and carried her to their bed, placing her down carefully. She took his royal robes off while he slowly undressed her from the queen’s dragon gown customised just for her. He could only see perfection in her. While she saw the whole universe in his eyes. He ran her finger on her face smiling at her, looking into her eyes, admiring her, as his heart pounded fast with love and desire. She kneeling on the bed, wrapped her arms around as he took her breath away, stealing everything at once from her, unfolding her, the whole night. Fire on fire. He laid her down and whispered, in her ears “I love you,” then they said that to each other again. “For all the years yet to come and forever.” 
The good turn evil but the evil always remained good, always misunderstood and hated the most. With love, struggle, sacrifice, life and death. The wrongs are turned right. Aqua through her three life times made it all come true. But still unsure about a future that’s too far and dreamy. How will Aqua survive these obstacles? Will she let the Demon King have her? 


Pixie_Auri: The plot and background of this book are truly remarkable. The characters are relatable and were introduced in an interesting way, allowing us to understand a bit of their view of reality. The only problem for me was the flow of text, it got a bit confusing at times. With a bit of editing, this book will be amazing.

JcPancakes: A fantasy tale of forbidden love between two beings from Heaven and Hell. Scars and past traumas still haunted them. Can they overcome the obstacles even after death? Writing Quality: Fantastic writing with masterful use of expressions, terms and synonyms. The descriptions of the scenes and interactions are packed with details. There are a few minor mistakes from punctuation, spelling and grammar but nothing major that would ruin the reading. Awesome and enjoyable read! Stability of Updates: Daily consistent updates? What more to ask? 5 stars! Story Development: The story flows well, with points and introduction of characters keep the readers engaged. There’s already a sense of tension, foreshadowing and connection to the past that will affect the present and future events in the start. Excellent! Just a personal opinion, I think the story’s pacing is a little slow (yes, I understand that stories of this nature are paced like this). To be honest, I loath stories with demon kings, wealthy ceos and such but this is good. I can really see why it is deserving of silver. Character Design: The characters are all well written, I love it. I like the dynamics between the characters, especially between Huo, Aqua and Volca. It’s going to be quicy. I was going to comment about how her relationship with her family was cut short and then it turns out that her family are also Heavenly beings. That’s a really nice touch. World Background: Again, I like the world building. There will be much more to explore in the story but already it’s quite solid. Nothing really much to say here.

Story Post Last Updated: May 20, 2021


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