Title: Reuniting With My Ex-Husband On Christmas
Genre(s): Realistic Fiction
Tags: Romance, Christmas, Love (excluded non-tag)
Main Lead: Male, Female
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 1 || TQ 2 SV 1 || Overall: 6 (score explanation)
Number of Chapters: 32
Chapter Length: Short
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: December 7, 2020
Date of Last Update: April 8, 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 21.8K
Number of Reviews: 77
“Honey you know we can’t just sit here and not help our daughter get her husband back,” Matthew shouted angrily.
“How on earth can we pull something like that off? And you
know Anthony is no longer our daughter’s husband. For heavens sake we were both witnesses
when both Alayna and Anthony signed their divorce papers so, why would you want us to save something that is already lost,” Rachel hissed as she placed her hands on her hips in frustration.
“We were in their situation once, do you not remember when we got divorced? If you did then you would know that we got lost at some point as well. But luckily for your mom, we got reunited and we even got back married and renewed our vows and the same thing is now happening to our daughter and your here complaining,” Matthew raised his voice with a look of disbelief evident on his face.
I know that bringing my daughter Alayna back with Anthony won’t be
easy but giving it a try won’t hurt will it?
My wife may not agree with my plans, but with or without her support my mission will not be affected instead it will be effective.
I know that some chapters are meant to be closed but my daughters chapter with Anthony won’t be, because I see light at the end of their tunnel and that’s something.
In carrying this mission out, I’m going to kidnap Anthony on the first day of December so that he will be able to spend the whole Christmas holiday with the family I created with my lovely wife Rachel.
All of my children take the time off from their work every Christmas and they all make it a point of duty that they all spend the Holiday with the entire family. Just so we can all spend good quality time together, Its a traditional thing but it’s mainly done so that we can all catch up on what each of us has been up to the whole time we were absent one from another.
The reason I’m not asking Anthony to spend the Christmas holiday with me and my family is because I don’t want to ruin the surprise, but be honest do you see any fun in ruining the surprise?
Will Matthews plan work in
getting his daughter back with Anthony, and if yes how?
Does Matthew still loves his ex-wife?
Chantielu: The plotline of the story of interesting. There were a few errors that need tweaking. At first, I wasn’t sure who the protagonist was, but as I went on I got a clear understanding. All in all, the external conflict of the story had me continuing to the next chapter. I’m sure when it’s polished, it’ll be an amazing novel. 👍Keep up the good work, though
Bee227_: The idea behind this story is definitely a unique one that I haven’t come across before and makes for a fairly fun read. There are some grammatical mistakes that need fixing, but the author has mentioned they will work on it later which is good to know. The characters have pretty interesting dialogue and there are also some surprising twists in the story. Overall, this work is one worth checking out! Keep up the good work author!!
KannySenpai: The first thing I notice when reading this Novel, is that the first few chapters of the story introduce a lot of characters at once, which was a little overwhelming at the moment, but slowly you start to get who is who from the abundance of dialogue. The characters do need some development with descriptions, but other than that, fun to imagine what they look like! Same goes for the background of the scenario, more describing but has a general idea on where the story is taking place.
The grammar in this story and the overall structure needs some work, but the Author does have a compelling hook that draws the reader into a festive atmosphere.
It looks like the Author has a reasonable amount of dialogue between the characters. Dialogue is important to a story and this book has it down!
I encourage the Author to practice editing the chapters before releasing them to lessen grammatical errors and possibly filling the chapters a bit more with description. Other than that, I wish them luck with future chaps and votes!
Story Post Last Updated: May 11, 2021
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