[Story] lead me to the mansion

Title: lead me to the mansion
Author: Glenstonx
Genre(s): Horror & Thriller
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Audience: –
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
AVB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 2 || TQ 1 SV 2 || Overall: 7 (score explanation)
Number of Chapters: 36
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release:November 17, 2020
Date of Last Update: February 11, 2021
AVB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 38K
Number of Reviews: 24
Synopsis:
The last descendants of Arlott have died and left the wife with the family’s surname. A mansion passed through generations, yet she was unaware of this mansion’s existence. Her husband died in an odd and despicable way as if he knew his doomsday, was it a disease that corrupted him or was it the works of someone? Lilith is to unravel everything by what her husband had left for her. The mansion. 
Stuck in the forgotten era, she came to a stop before the wooden door. It was loose and the door is barely hinged, the knob rattled open. In her sight, stood a ‘person’ ? ? her hands waver in fear, her scream is just behind her throat, she felt her knees give up. The clock ticked slowly with every second felt eternity. “It was you two” she exclaimed.

Review(s)

MelAniv: The author is very talented in his descriptions! Gotta say it was superb! It was like just playing around with words and it captivates the reader’s attention! The descriptions were effective on making the readers visualize the current happenings of the scenes! Good luck author! You have a bright future ahead!

phoenixhyperion: The flow of your story and settings were captivating. The use of descriptive words and the transition plot were greatly depicted. Especially the emotional state of your characters I honestly admired how you can put it into words. And the way how you start the story with a gloomy atmosphere and depressing state of your MC can hook readers effectively. Especially those that are like me who’s into sad and tragic romance. I’m not a fan of horror stories but your story caught my interest alright. Here’s hoping to read more awesome and thrilling substance, you did a great job author! keep up the good work.

BlaccLotus: Masterpiece. Absolutely Hidden Gem.
A beautiful and well written Horror and Thriller book by an extremely talented writer. A very good read for you who are into dark and melancholic story with unique and original concept and story.
The book is very good, absolutely gem. I could feel the dark atmosphere and main character, Lilith’s sadness and loneliness. I was even shedding tears in some of paragraphs because I could really feel her sadness. This is both Horror and Melancholic story I’ve been looking for.
It’s very nice reading experience and here’s my honest review. 
Positive:
– Beautiful writing style with little to no mistakes in grammar
– Very good character’s design and background
– Rich with description. I was amazed at how good author describing everything in the book. The characters’ expression were pictured in great detail and everything such as characters’ features, places and etc were described in great detail and rich with description. 
– I have a very high expectation on this book
Negative
– Honestly I really want to find some minus points on this book so I can give some constructive critique/criticism. But sadly I hardly found any flaw in the book.
– This book really good as I found no flaw on it.
Overall. It’s very great reading experience and despite being a reader who aren’t into Horror genre, I could enjoy, very enjoying reading this book.
Please continue writing this masterpiece to the very end. I wish you author good luck. I hope this book could reach many of readers and get a great exposure. this book is absolutely gem among gems.

Story Post Last Updated: May 11, 2021