[Story] My roommate is a devil

Title: My roommate is a devil
Author: nishidurani
Genre(s): Fantasy Romance
Tags: romance, fantasy, comedy
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 1 || TQ 1 SV 1 || Overall: 5
Number of Chapters: 33
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: December 5, 2020
Date of Last Update: January 9, 2021
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 22.4K
Number of Reviews: 14
Synopsis:
Alex was broke, he doesn’t have enough money to pay his sisters fees and buy something for her for Christmas. He wanted to do something, special for her this Christmas, so he took the advice of his best friend to give his room on rent. 
But due to Christmas holidays, he didn’t get any application from a man to take the room. In desperation, he accepted the girl who had asked many times for the room. 
What he doesn’t know is, the girl is a demon ran away from the group who came to destroy the happiness of festivities. 
She, who is like a child of the superhero. Innocent yet powerful met with a pair of humble and mature Alex and funny and flirt Michael with the sweetness of Anna. 
What chaos will they make together. 
Come and find out.

Review(s)

Nihansh_Niharika: It’s a sweet story, just like the Christmas. No villains or stepsisters, no plotting and planning. But a clueless devil, with a sweet boy. And a flirty.
I think it’s for those who moments when we just want something light to read, that made us feel loved and we can laugh to our heart content.

Alice_Miller: “Oh that lily where was she touching you?
Nothing special she was just touching my lips with hers”
You should add this line in your synopsis. I really laughed reading the chapters. The characters are sweet and funny. I enjoyed reading it after all the dramas.
Most important thing is writer has started working only a month ago, yet all her books have a different flavour of life. Clap for you.

CodeW: Okay. General Pros and Cons review: 
Pro: Character dialogue. Your written dialogue perfectly shows the character’s personalities. Plot development is also good-I liked how it quickly evolved into a vampire related story. 
Cons: Grammar. Setting description. Those two things are the only things that hold your writing back. With grammar, there will be better execution. Setting descriptions can certainly help make the reader’s mental image more vivid. 
Best of luck to you, 
CodeW

Story Post Last Updated: January 10, 2021

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