[Story] Detective W’s Mysteries

Title: Detective W’s Mysteries
Author: CodeW
Genre(s): Magical Realism
Tags: thriller, Detectives, Mystery, Action (excluded some non tags)
Audience: G
Main Lead: Male, Female
Status: Ongoing
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 2 SWB 1 || TQ 3 SV 1 || Overall: 8
Number of Chapters: 35
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: November 11, 2020
Date of Last Update: January 4, 2021
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 16.7K
Number of Reviews: 33
Hello, my friends! Welcome to Detective W’s Agency at Owlsburgh, Pennsylvania! 
I’m glad to have you as my assistants! I’m grateful that you guys are here to help me solve cases-from the easiest to the most complicated! 
Rate: 20USD/Hour. Many benefits included. If you really want this job and work your brains out, give the above number a call! 
The mystery-I will give the honor to you of solving them! Don’t worry!
Glad to be solving mysteries with you, my friends!
Detective W


CoolForniteplayer: So, I like your plot there! It is intriguing, the characters are entertaining too that makes it lively, which is a plus point. Overall, this story is a great one! Keep up the good work, Author!

KristineElias: Okay, this is cute story thus far. The characters are fun and cute like i read it all in one go, noe i can’t wait for more. 
But, there were some mistakes, though minor, it would greatly help your readers if you could clean them, like typos, punctuation marks and capitalization. I hope you won’t drop this book. More power author!

Krystal88: I always enjoyed reading mystery works, so I was excited to begin this one. I am reminded of Conan Doyle’s style of writing with the short stories all somewhat connected together. (Compliment, btw, I love ACD) 
I PERSONALLY always enjoy the character being undescribed and ungendered, as my own bias, makes it easier for anybody on earth to put themselves in the MC’s (or supporting character in this case!) shoes. My own MC’s I go out of the way to never mention hair or eye color, race, etc. Again, my own bias there. 
The “mysteries” are spaced out enough for the reader to draw their own conclusions, something else I enjoy. 
I like your work, Author, keep it up!

Carlie_commenter: I have read two chapters of this engaging story and it’s not bad for a writing style I don’t particularly like. I usually like books that are in the first or third person. There are some parts where you can break up the story into better chunks. as in where the prolog ends you could have put a chapter end there and then started the actual story. It was a bit jarring to go from chapter one to chapter two with chapter two being so short. I know it was an explanation and conclusion to the pot in chapter one but it didn’t set up anything for the rest of the book or the next story. 
I also feel like I should note that the descriptions should be better or the setting and the characters. 
Don’t let this discourage you from making more stories.

Story Post Last Updated: January 6, 2021


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