[Story] Reborn: The Childe’s Consort

Title: Reborn: The Childe’s Consort
Author: Littlepunnie
Genre(s): Fantasy Romance
Tags: Reincarnation, Romance, Adventure, Female Lead, Action, Cultivation, Fantasy, Magic, Weapons, Witches, Warlocks
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 8
Number of Chapters: 20
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: November 1, 2020
Date of Last Update: December 19, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 54.9K
Number of Reviews: 34
Synopsis:
It was the year 1858. Heidi Magrita shivered against the cold, harsh wind. Around her feet is nothing but gore and death. Her eyes were blank and her heart numb. 
Bending her aching knees she looks down, unwilling to look away from the ugly sight of her dead child’s hollowed, bleeding eye sockets. Her eyes was flooded with tears as the earth was covered with blood. 
She was killed by her own husband, and was reborn. She travelled the lands of La San Niño to achieve the prowess she wanted to have and accomplish everything that was devoid in her past life, and that includes slimming the chances of her getting the Lord Lucas De Lixure’s attention to avoid the blood massacre to happen again. 
Green witches, Dark sorcerers, Black witches and Mortals have scattered the lands of La San Niño. Holy witches was annihilated to achieve the so-called peace that all the races have now experienced. 
But what they did not know, that blood will cover the lands of La San Niño once again. 
Everything is out of control and no one will be able to control the wisps of death. 

Review(s)

MistressUnderworld: Awesome characters. Another unique approach to time jump and dialogue. I love the names in this book. I hope to be reading more of it. I’m glad you’re not one to shy away from extreme scenes. Hope to see more chapters soon.

Jo_J: Nicely written! Big plus for the fact that at the beginning you explained about the backgound and all author’s notes. An Interesting storyline and expressive characters. 
Well done!

midnight_bloom: Great synopsis and premise. I was taken aback by the gory stuff lol as I was not ready for it (did not expect). Yet, the descriptions were so vivid that I shuddered just by reading them because I could see it in my head. LOL. This work has lots of potential. Maybe just a little bit more polishing but I can see it going to great heights. Keep on writing, author. 👍

Xylesia: The plot is unique and intriguing. Reincarnation with vengeance is something that I definitely like. Author’s writing style is good but it could be more polished as I had to read few lines twice to understand what was exactly going on and who was speaking to whom. Maybe single quoting the thoughts would help to distinguish more. but other than that, I really loved seeing a strong female lead. I’m excited for the upcoming chapters! Thank you for working hard!

Tanya_Winters: Wow! The first chapter has gore but the way you narrated the story hooked me. The descriptions are well done and the names of the places are really unique. I can’t help but think of Las Piñas City when I saw the La Piñas 😂.
There are a few grammatical errors like the space before a comma, and some common nouns in uppercase but they can easily be overlooked by the engrossed reader. The dialogue is fluid and well-written. Your story has great potential. I also really like the Victorian setting. You’ve included a lot of Victorian-sounding words which I really liked. Keep up the good work, author. Great job! 😊

Hua_Li_An: “Reborn the Childe’s Consort” is a good novel with the ever-loved Reincarnation theme. I have seen how the author had admitted to being a novice writer (and I wholly agree that we become better as we write on), so I cannot comment much on the grammatical issues and the flow of the story, but I can see potential in the plot itself. It is filled with drama, revenge, and a bit of humor, so I can see it becoming a great read for many readers.

xiaohai_23: Wow, read it all in one go! 
The first chapters tell about the first revenge of the MC. I think the author made a good choice, with a “small boss” before developing the plot further, so that the readers get used to the style of writing. 
I found some grammar errors, and a couple of times I had problems understanding what the author meant. Overall, I understand what’s happening, so I guess it’s not such a big issue. 
The MC is the tough type, she takes her fate in her hands, and that’s another positive point. 
Also, it’s the first story I read with “Spanish” names, so it’s kind of refreshing. Here people usually use german names when writing about nobility, so I needed like three seconds to adjust. The character names are easy to discern (which is not always the case, so another plus!). 
I’d like to know more about the ML, but I guess I’ll have to wait 😦

Story Post Last Updated: December 20, 2020