[Story] My Heart Beats For You |bxb|

Title: My Heart Beats For You |bxb|
Author: Ysabel_xox
Genre(s): LGBT+
Tags: gay, bxb, bl, yaoi, lgbt, romance, boyxboy, fluff, happy ending, illness
Audience:
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
VB Assessment Score: PDE 0 CDD 1 SWB 1 || TQ 2 SV 1 || Overall: 5
Number of Chapters: 30
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: August, 2020
Date of Last Update: December 2, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 79.5K
Number of Reviews: 57
Synopsis:
Cooper never had a normal life. He always needs more attention than normal people. Thus, in his eighteenth birthday, he made a deal to his father. At least this year, Cooper’s wish will come true. Just not as happy as he wants to be. 

Review(s)

mssuigeneris: First of all, we have an amazing set of characters. 
Cooper seems to be the innocent and oblivious one. 
Adrian is the mature one in the group. 
Kristine is the best girl for being a simp. 
And Calvin. There’s an air of mystery I like about him. 
Its a fun, light read. Away from the high fiction of this platform. Though the writing have several grammatical errors here and there, they can be easily corrected. Ganbari, author!

AlishbaM: The synopsis is too short, doesn’t really convey what the story is actually about. As for the chapter, the beginning is really good and dramatic. Instantly lures the reader in. A little more focus in the description department should do the trick. Also, since you’re writing in third pov, I suggest working a little on the dialogues. They seem more like spoken in first person and you might wanna stick to one pov. Other than that, it’s good. Worth giving a shot!

Readoholic: This is my first time reading this genre. Not sure what to expect but so far the story seems to be in sync. The story is developing in perfect pace and it is very well written. The characters are perfectly flawed. The real life emotions and situations are amazingly written. I’m excited to continue the reading and watch how their story unfold.

Volteair: This story has a cute premise and an interesting, yet comically naive MC. He definitely gives off the sheltered and closed-off life that he’s had to live, which is a solid dichotomy against Adrian and the rest of his classmates. Though, he does feel a bit too naive at times, but in a weirdly charming way. Can’t wait to see more of what’s to come

Story Post Last Updated: December 4, 2020

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