[Story] Kito

Title: Kito
Author: ChaoticDeluge
Genre(s): Action, Fantasy, Mystery
Tags: high fantasy, martial arts, magic powers, magic, monsters, angels, demons
Main Lead: Male, Female
Status: Ongoing
VB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 1 SWB 2 || TQ 3 SV 2 || Overall: 10
Number of Chapters: 27
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: June 23, 2020
Date of Last Update: November 1, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Tapas, Wattpad
Number of Views: 807
Number of Reviews: N/A
24 years after the end of the Necromantic War – otherwise known as the Hundred-Year War – the Realms are still recovering. The powerful mages of the Allied Front hold the line against the Demonic forces of Naraka, though the undead hordes led by the Pyromancer: Xan is firmly put behind them…
Kito Tiko was known throughout the Front as a hero thanks to his defeat of Xan towards the end of the war, and his choice to settle down afterwards was warmly received by his peers and former leaders with no argument. However, a storm begins to brew. Forces amass, seeking to destroy Kito and everything he loves, and when his father mysteriously disappears, he is forced back into a dark world of bloodshed and violence. Forced back into the warfare he thought long behind him, to face demons both old and new – within and without…



Story Post Last Updated: November 30, 2020


5 thoughts on “[Story] Kito

  1. Oh hey it’s my story! I didn’t expect to get recommends so early in my writing career!

    I’d like to make one small ammendment, Kito has two leads, male and female. It just isn’t entirely obvious to begin with, so it’s not a huge issue.

    Thanks for putting the story up!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Hi! Thanks for taking a look at the story post! 🙂

      I edited the main lead per your request.
      I did note the switches in POVs. To explain why I listed it as just Male, it was because the story was predominately told from Kito’s perspective and settings; hence, why he’s the “main” lead. I do this for other stories having multiple leads but with one which the story mainly centers around. In few cases, a story is told from equal Male and Female sides of the two leads; in which case, I do list it as both. Your story is still ongoing, so I definitely will miss this if that is also the case for your story.

      Keep up the good writing!

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Of course! Thank you for the very generous ratings, I’m very happy with where you landed me!

    Thank you so much for changing it! It wasn’t an issue, it won’t be obvious that the lead is split until a little later on. The problems with ongoing writing, eh?

    Your reasonings make perfect sense to me, accross the board 😀 Thanks again!

    Liked by 2 people

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