[Story] Gaming Sword Magician

Title: Gaming Sword Magician
Author: Lazy_leon
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags:
Audience:
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 2 || TQ 3 SV 2 || Overall: 9
Number of Chapters: 84
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: October 2, 2020
Date of Last Update: November 24, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 360.8K
Number of Reviews: 27
Synopsis:
In another world, where the awakening of Class weapons is done through a magical ceremony.
Whittaker, a frost mage with a system, joins a magical Academy. Everyone is done with their life. Others take days to absorb a mana increasing potion while he only needs some seconds. Other take days to learn skills and spell while he only needs to use Skill Development points and learn them in an instant.
Others take years of practice to become strong while he just needs to level up, obtain attribute points, and use them to increase his strength!
The kingdom of water is technically advanced, and its technology surpasses the earth by some level.
A looming threat in the north, and a grand conspiracy in the South.
Boundless pride, endless might
Reality; bend with a single will
You have the blood of night
Take control over your time!
None can trample over your pride!
For Night is endless; It encompasses all!

Review(s)

Xjski: Exceeding good novel. The grammar was a refreshing experience for me, so was the plot of the story, less cliche, and the authors has grasped the meaning of the show not tell. I hope you will get what you deserve, a large reader base!

RFBlade: 15 Chapters in and only one fight. The plot is slow but the characters are fleshed out well.
The only reason why I am reading this novel even though the battle scene are so less is because of the unique personalities and features of the character.
You got to add more battle scenes!!!!!! Or say goodbye to me, your loyal reader.

Hilka_Aklih: Really Nice.  
I love it. Good character building. Nice novel as a whole. The plot is chill, exciting and sometimes filled with a slice of life. I like that there is another world behind the real world, or as you said it. β€œTwo sides of the same coin! I hope you make it big, you deserve it. Good novel way better than most originalπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

WasteOfOxygen: I am not someone who writes reviews for novels (since I’m really lazy, and I mostly like commenting on chapters), but I certainly have to give it to ya, I did not expect this novel to be such a twister. At first when I read the title, it felt like the typical VRMMO novels out there, but this one is a real twister. 
Now truthfully speaking this is my FIRST review, so I can’t give the specifics, but all in all I must give this a 5-star just based on the World Background and Story Development, the chapters have some small grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too much to worry about since some people can fix those in the paragraph comments. Keep up the good work Author!! I will surely reserve at LEAST 1 power stone and 1 fast pass if it’s the last thing I do!

Thereviewer48: Writing Quality: 4/5 
Your writing is good with tiny mistakes, but you have a capitalization problem with some words. And you don’t even remain consistent with it. You are going to capitalize a certain word that is not usually capitalize, be consistent with it.
Updating Stability: 5/5
I always give this rating 
Story Development: 4/5
Interesting concept, good pacing. I like the way you are going with your plotline. 
Character Design: 4/5 
I like you MC, they are enjoyable to read. 
World Background: 4/5
I like your world and the descriptions of it, I would like a little more detail, but other than that the reader knows what kind of world they are entering into. 
Keep up the good work!

Story Post Last Updated: November 25, 2020

2 thoughts on “[Story] Gaming Sword Magician

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s