[Story] ALISON

Author: dearking
Genre(s): Drama, Romance
Audience: R-18
Main Lead: Female
Status: Complete (but still marked Ongoing)
VB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 2 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 10
Number of Chapters: 62
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: April, 2020 (estimation based on comments)
Date of Last Update: November 13, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Inkitt
Number of Views: N/A
Number of Reviews: 40
“you are mine and no one else’s , Are we clear?” He growled and I gulped hysterically before nodding.. “You are not my father, I don’t have to listen to you and I can do whatever the hell I want. So leave me alone~” I yelled and slammed my way of the door. Alison Stone is a ward to a very wealthy and feared business mogul known as David Hertz, She was handed to him for protection by her father George Stone who happened to be David’s best friend and business partner, before he died. Often Alison wondered if they he had abandoned her and she hated not knowing the truth and hated David for his tight grip on her, that was until she turned 18 and the truth that moved her entire existence was revealed to her. Now she either as to accept the truth or live with the consequences. .


praba: Wonderful. She thought how human shouldearn to accept things as it is and live. Kudos
It’s was so realistic ending though painful but it’s the truth and she crafted it beautifully.

Charly James-Matthews: Great story with an emotional ending. Has some spelling and grammar issues but nothing that can’t be easily fixed going over it quickly. Amazing story well worth the read

Joanne: Liked the book. Has romance and some mystery. Keeps you interested and wanting more. Story is good but the punctuation isn’t good and some of the words don’t fit the sentence other then that it’s good.

Meha: This story was a good one, but the plot kind of went crazy, And it doesn’t make sense for an 18-year-old to marry a man twice her age, But overall I loved the story. The ending was very sad 😦

Deann21: I didn’t know who Alison was promised to in marriage? I was surprised and truly happy as the story developed who she ended up with. It’s a complicated story with so many characters coming into play, but make no mistake, it is a love story! It truly captured my heart and even though, the story had some punctuation and grammatical errors, It was a beautiful story. I honestly was crying as I finished reading this story! I hadn’t realized how invested I was in these two characters! Excellent job! I would feel so lucky and honored to have a love like theirs!

Emilia: I’m enjoying this book so far. Title – I like it, but it’s not that intriguing. But it gives you some ideas of what the book is going to be about. Blurb – It is great, even if the beginning seems more like a tease than a blurb. Chapters – The main problem I have with this book is the grammar and writing. Sometimes you are missing words, letters or symbols. And other times you have misspelt words or composed sentences that are hard to understand. And all these things are easy to fix, you could just download a writing/grammar program. I am using Grammarly and it is working great. Also, I miss a lot of descriptions. This story would be great if you had more descriptions of both surroundings and people because now you have to imagine what the characters look like. Other things that I think are pulling the story down are that sometimes characters get a personality change or that something happens without a reason and it just feels like it came out of nowhere. These are my personal opinions and don’t take them to heart, meaning don’t be upset by them because they are just meant as improvement suggestion. Keep it up, take care and best wishes! /Emilia 🙂

Story Post Last Updated: November 24, 2020


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