[Story] Lightning immortal

Title: Lightning immortal
Author: blue_cloud
Genre(s): Eastern Fantasy
Audience: G
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 1 || TQ 1 SV 1 || Overall: 5
Number of Chapters: 52
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: October 17, 2018
Date of Last Update: December 11, 2018
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 861.9K
Number of Reviews: 23
chu feng , a high school student who is so obsessed with cultivation novels that he wants to drop and start cultivating to become immortal got killed when he tried to save a girl from thugs, but to his surprise, he found that he was reincarnated into an immortal continent. 
taking it as a second chance he promised to become an Existence that looks down on gods and demons.


ImBloo: The novel is light-hearted and somewhat humorous. 
The typos and lack of capitalization are annoying, though. Feels like a first draft. 
Also you should flesh out the cultivation levels more. 
Keep working hard!!!

Chaosneko: Not a bad start, but could use way less swearing. And what is with the looking to see if his dick is still there? Are you going to make the MC a pervert? Have to say that pervert’s stopped being amusing several stories back.

Susanei: When I read the synopsis I was pretty impressed. So many information and events in just a few lines, so I thought if I could really get what you want to say on this novel, but when I started the first episode it made me laugh, and I think it’s a really good thing! because I understood what style of writing you have and it’s very fresh, 
Keep going!

Elude: I don’t even know how to find good original novels anymore (the rating score is always misleading), it’s like climbing an arduous journey through extremely trash grammar 50% of the time.  
Normally I’d do an in-depth review on why I don’t like a certain novel, but this novel is pretty self-explanatory. 
Writing Quality: 1.5/5 (My eyes are bleeding) 
Stability Of Updates: 5/5 (I’ll give you this) 
Story Development: 2/5 (MC has a very steep learning curve) 
Character Design: 2/5 (Look one line above) 
World Background: 3/5 (Well, there’s a world and it’s not too bad, I can faintly picture an image.) 

Story Post Last Updated: October 22, 2020


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