[Story] Human in a Demon’s Hide

Title: Human in a Demon’s Hide (formerly The World Can Go to Hell for All I Care)
Author: HomelessDancer (formerly Homeless_Dancer)
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags:
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 2 SWB 1 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 8
Number of Chapters: 39
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: April 2, 2019
Date of Last Update: November 4, 2019
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 161.3K
Number of Reviews: 9
Synopsis:
I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier.
Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself.
I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws!
I only had a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick some ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt.
I just need enough money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect.
The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on our family name. We became such a joke in the country that even our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but that doesn’t matter. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable!
To protect the smiles of my only siblings, I’ll do anything.
Yet, life manages to shit on you when things are just getting good.

Review(s)

Reeksws: Really good story so far. MC is not self righteous but he is street smart and funny. His background also makes sense for his personality

FaebyenTheFairy: I gotta say, you did pretty well with the first five chapters, all things considered. 
Yes, you made use of some cliché tropes, but it didn’t lessen my enjoyment of the scenes at all! 
I could clearly imagine every scene while the inner monologue by the MC made understanding him as a character very easy! 
I hope to see you write more of the story and explore the fantasy genre.

90751052: Do you like war stories? Do you like family drama? Do you like panti-I mean the military? 
Then you would definitely like this book! Join the read and find out how the world could go to hell (like my life…). 
While it’s too early to say much about the book, I believe it has a good start, so added to library, and time to follow until it collects dust! 
Grammar has few errors, but are not that annoying and can be ignored. 
The genre feels wrong. Hmm, is it really a fantasy? I’m not sure what the author will do to add those elements, so I can’t be 100% sure it’s not. 
Anyways, keep it up! Author~ >3</

BAJJ: Writing Quality: 4star! there are grammatical errors here and there but it is still considered good. I like the writing style and how author narrates and describe things. Also, I find the word choices of the author quite smart. 
Stability of update: 3 star. Well, 1 month and it only have a very few chapters released. Boooh! You make us wait for too damn long!
Story development: 4.5 star! it’s progressing pretty good so far.
Character Design: 5 star! Characters felt real and have a life which is why I like this novel.
World Background: 4 star! this is where I got confused. Thankfully, Author-san clarified the settings on the comment section.

Story Post Last Updated: October 22, 2020

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