[Story] Sky Fall Legend

Title: Sky Fall Legend
Author: Ivory Dragon
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags:
Audience: PG-13
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped, Will be Discontinued on Webnovel and Moved elsewhere
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1 CDD 1 SWB 2 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 8
Number of Chapters: 164
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Medium
Date of First Release: May 7, 2019
Date of Last Update: March 30, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 1M
Number of Reviews: 37
Synopsis:
A retired meta-human spy has his whole life flipped upside down when a stranger disintegrates him with a magic gun! But before he can blink, he is reborn in a world full of magic, heroes, mighty pharaoh gods, and ancient titans. 
In the lowest realm of the Divine Universe, a young adult named Jodye Trill from modern Earth is reborn in a world full of magic he never imagined! 
In his first life, he was born into poverty in an affluent society! 
In this life, he was born into luxury in a cruel and vicious land! 
It’s an unknown yet beautiful land of spiritual cultivation and martial arts but plagued by dark plots and evil techniques. Women are victimized, and used as tools! 
Once the destructive nature of the land extends to his own family, Jodye is unable to stand for the state of this world any longer.”Strength! Without strength I watched my lover suffer. Without strength, I stood helpless as that same lover died!! Without strength, there is no respect, no love, and there can be no peace! I must be stronger. I will carve out my legend of strength to bring my world peace!!”

Review(s)

hhhhz45: This novel, i dont know if im stupid or what but i cant seem to understand plot at all it jumps from one place to another in seconds. The plot is so twisted it you cant follow.

TheRedHand: This is a really good book. It has a really interesting plotline going and the world building is very original. There is also plenty of mysterious happenings going on which I love. I can’t wait to read more.

Lizst: This story had a nice start and a good world development, but the author had to make the women objects of satisfaction. Too much rapid and other dark elements involved…. I get most authors can’t help but use Ntr to influence the readers emotions but it’s too much here, that it thwarts the story.

ChuLong: I like how this story constantly makes me want to know more about world and the plot as things get revealed, it’s not an overload of information and there are a couple of unexpected twists. The main plot takes a bit long to get started, and I’m not even sure that it had, but I honestly I’ve enjoyed everything so far and keep coming back for more. I can’t wait to see how Jodye becomes a complete badass Pharaoh Titan

nutcracker: overall great read. a pretty high level stuff in original novels. but too dark definitely not for me. i mean seriously everything is going haywire for girls. that’s not what u call a truly cultivation world and i love ur time skip and its just eros in less severe form and proper story but nah not my cup of tea

Sri101: Overall, the story is great so far. The main character and side characters are given time to be fleshed out while the world building takes place. The author somehow manages to write a cultivation novel that’s story is founded upon the mystery of the protagonist’s real identity. I would recommend this story to anyone who loves cultivation novels. Although this novel is different from mainstream cultivation novels, I find that as long as you give it a try, you will find yourself enjoying the novel and waiting for more.

Temi_Amoo: This is my first time commenting on a book and I must say it’s a really nice book. Unique cultivation system with the ancient pharaoh of a thing. Nice supporting characters. Only issue and also an advice is if you could make women less objectified cuz all the women so far has just been as a tool in a scheme whether they know it or not. Let’s have stronger females. And pleaseeeee I hope our First Lady isis is not touched by the white demon. Am a guy by the way. Thumbs up

Dva: Sudden leaps in story line, needs more background and the characters need more filling. The framework of the storyline is good but needs lots of background and better transistions between parallel story line. 
Whats good is that its different from the other fantasy story lines. 
And it makes it much more interesting that I can foresee many twists and turns in the storyline in the future.It would be good if there are more chapters released with the existing chapters reworked since there are exciting hints about the story line but which will not come out if the transistions are not smoother, more background given, the characters are fleshed out more.Looking forward to an exciting story which is unique in its own way and which have several differences from the regular or mainstream stories which are presently there in this particular speciality. This has body tempering line, sword line, mage line and various other forces.Its addictive.

Froschmo: Yo, Fro is here~~!!
This is really excellent story, good descriptive and a lot of imagination. One of good gem that surely will becomes popular in the future. Writing quality : excellent, easy to understand, only a bit typo and grammar mistakes. Though, I am bit irritated by too much of information dump in the beginning. Especially the prologue was so long with so many dao path explanations. I felt dizzy just reading them, so I skipped them a bit, just read the main point. Though I understand you put a lot of information early to tell reader the different between MC’s unique path and other people path. But surelly you could take out them slowly one by one. Well, it proved the author’ excellent imagination, I guess. 
Character design : though I understand from MC’s view as a man from another world, so he show a lot of curiosity. I felt a bit weird about the family’s response. Especially the father who just dumped a lot of information to one year old child as if expecting him to understand them. It was scary and abnormal. The family didnt even felt fear about the child, just envy and astonishing awe from the awesomeness of the child. Like you said about the baby’s body whose muscles were still forming, he already walking at age of few month old. His family didnt even check his body. Also MC’s character was too impulse I guess, he didnt show any cautious feeling to other people, blatantly daring to show his greatness, talking and walking like a *****. For someone who was caught, taken advantage and experimented by others, he sure show a lot of trust to these people. Well, other than these, overall is great. The world building also is excellent, very imaginative. I just reached chap 10, so I cant judge much about story development. I will check again after done reading later chapter. However, author has done a good job for this story, keep the hard work!

Story Post Last Updated: October 20, 2020

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