[Story] Broken Caged Heart

Title: Broken Caged Heart
Author: mvphoenix
Genre(s): Romance Fiction
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Audience:
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 36
Date of First Release: February 18, 2019
Date of Last Update: March 23 , 2019
VB Assessment Score: TQ 3   PD 2   CF 2   ||   RL 2   CL 3  ||  Overall: 12
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 104.8 K
Number of Reviews: 17
Synopsis:
Greed , Money, and Power. Is this all that matters? Why does the world revolve around them? Why is it that they are important to everyone? If this is what the world has come to I want to be excluded.
This world is filthy. Is it worth living in such a place?
I am so stupid to think that I could live cleanly in such a world. I’m so unlucky.
The darkness has touched me.
Can I still hope for love?

Review(s)

yayallo: VERY surprising start. I loved it. I dont really know what happened to the mc. It a bit mysterious but enchanting. I hope she can move on. The story has me hooked. the plot is *muah* so juicy. I need the romance but i can already tell it will be amazing.

NOface1: This novel is amazing. I don’t know how many times I cried within n the first 30 chapters. It so full of emotions, traumas, and internal and psychological conflicts. The MC is having a satisfying change throughout the story. The plot is crazy and exciting. Im dying for more. Mass releases pls!!!!!!

djwasborn: Im actually quite surprised about the content of the story. Its quite disturbing because of some scenes which are not applicable to children’s. Funny because I’m already 18😂. But kiddin aside the story itself were beautifully portrayed, i could feel the sorrow, pain and the need for revege that the girl wants, . It brings up this kind of emotion that makes you feel and to know and to read more. I’m looking forward for the next update. Hope and prayin that this novel will be a blast. Keep it up author-sama 😊😊😊

1392n: Ok. so I really like how its going so far. The plot went from one thing to another. Its a roller coaster of emotions. I loved the start and i love the new characters. I wish i could see more sweet scenes but i also want her to grow up for her man but ughhh I’m so conflicted,

(second) Okay soooo. One of the chapters was unexpected and dark but it added to the change within the MC. The change within her is necessary for her growth. I find this story very deep and appealing. I’m eager for more and I hope it has a great ending. Good luck author.

Take_the_Moon: I only read until chapter 04, because after the rape scene I could not read anymore.
Good points: Good grammar; not afraid to write explicit scenes; good use of vulgar words (in my opinion rape, besides crime, should be portrayed as something heavy and bad, not costumed.) and you did it well.
Negative Points: I missed a story or a better introduction to this poor character, the type, who her parents are, how she became or was born in poverty, who these men are and why they chose her; The story was very fast, did not have that *******, so in the third chapter the girl is raped, plays in the face in such a fast way that I was shocked and I had to stop reading. If you have a preparation or ******* a little longer, the reader can prepare or skip the scene or just read; I do not know if it was your intention, but you have trivialized the question of her being raped by a man, as if her worst offense had been that her abuser was an old man. As if she were raped by a young or attractive man to minimize the fact that she was raped.
Well, people who like the style straight and fast, so good luck and keep writing.
Xoxo

 
Story Post Last Updated: March 26, 2019

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