[Story] The Demon’s Gate.

Title: The Demon’s Gate.
Author: ShiranuiShukumei
Genre(s): Eastern Fantasy
Tags:
Audience: G
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 235
Date of First Release: September 11, 2018
Date of Last Update: March 20, 2019
VB Assessment Score: TQ 3   PD 2   CF 3   ||   RL 2   CL 3  ||  Overall: 13
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 1 M
Number of Reviews: 22
Synopsis:
A cultivator is someone who can channel the natural energy through their body, strengthening their own body or performing almost magical feats. At birth, everyone manifests an inborn spell, a power belonging solely to them.
Yao Jun was born in a branch of the Yao clan, his inborn spell is considered a useless spell, a spell with no effect. Despite his useless spell, Yao Jun is steadfast and determined to cultivate, spending each day training his body to the limit.
All he wanted was to be allowed to live his life as he wanted, but fate makes a fool out of everyone, and his life would end up becoming so much more than he ever expected, taking him to the dark side of the world and beyond. When the Demon’s Gate opens, what will it bring to the world?

Review(s)

Jeremee07: Very enjoyable story. I just hope that there will be a clear outline of cultivation. They character build is great but the Mc I always just getting drug around against his free will its a bit frustrating and the fact that his women is always getting beat up lol

GoneMad: Really good novel, better than a lot of novels out there, especially if you’re into demon gods xD. if i didn’t know it i wouldn’t believe this is an original, really good word building, the character development could be a little smoother (just my opinion ) but it’s still really good a better than most novels. Good cultivation concept, i really can’t wait to find out more about it.

Little_Dino: I love this story! I very much recommend. The story is great. The heroine is a match for our mc in how much she works to power up. The character’s abilities in this story is very creative and interesting. Of course our mc is great too. He isn’t a snob where he is the savior of the world, but he isn’t cold. He is also intelligent, though I hope that the heroine would sometimes learn from him more on this point sometimes.
Tags: Romance, Adv, Action, Beast Companions, Tamer, Weak to Strong
Oh, and no harem ~

GatotKaca: The pace is good, writing quality & stability of updates superb.
Too depressing to read.
A lot of depressing scenes happened to MC. Despite all of the power up MC is still powerless in front of his real enemy.
Author can’t write a satisfying scene to boost morale of your reader.
A little face slapping time will do 😀
My dao heart not strong enough to read your story, lol.
Sorry to say this kind of novel is not my taste.
MC powered up > beating some shrimps > beaten SO HARD by big shrimp > moving all over the place > repeat.

ShEsHy: First off, I’m finally dropping this novel because this chapter ends with the second time the MC gets sucked into a spatial crack and separated from everyone.
That’s not to say that that’s not the only bad thing about it. It has more plotholes than it has… anything else, really.
The biggest one is obviously the MC. He could literally have all types of beasts (or even unlimited, dunno what the author plans to keep, the type limitation mentioned in the beginning or the unlimited version shown by the memory fragment simulation), but no, somehow a handful of strong-ish beasts is better than thousands of average ones.
Then there are the knowledge gaps. At the beginning, no one knows about the human/demon deal, until they magically do. Same with the continents, no one seems to know his original continent, until they magically all do.
Then there’s the current big bad in an undersea castle, who can apparently divine any and all information it wants, including the location of the MC’s group, but for some reason doesn’t just send people to either capture or kill them.
Seriously, the whole story is riddled with plotholes and sidetracking.

dedicatedblob: The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him…. His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)

 
Story Post Last Updated: March 21, 2019

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