[Story] The Ancient Rare Phoenix: Colourful Flames

Title: The Ancient Rare Phoenix: Colourful Flames
Author: TriggeredTurtle
Genre(s): Eastern Fantasy
Tags: Original, Reincarnation
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 126
Date of First Release: June 12, 2018
Date of Last Update: September 12, 2018
VB Assessment Score: TQ 3   PD 2   CF 1   ||   RL 1   CL 3  ||  Overall: 10
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 1 M
Number of Reviews: 24
Synopsis:
The legendary ancient phoenix with the colourful flames was reborn as a newborn baby through his final drop of blood in the Highest God Realm Plane.
After the newborn baby arrived at the Lowest Mortal Realm Plane, a couple found him and raised him as a son.
He’ll curiously observe and learn from others.
While everyone around calls him as a crazy stalker, an arrogant prodigal young master, shameless pervert, cold-blooded, evil, many names during his journey.
Much the same as the earlier incarnation, he’ll once again shake the whole Realm Planes reminding the horrors of the colourful flames to everyone.

Review(s)

Dark_Savvy: Well there’s nothing much to say in this novel, cause its already good for me and I also look forward on the action aspect where the MC truly battle his enemies black and blue, and also Author give him many setbacks so that he can learn,, but not too much i think? Or it depends… 😅😅

elliptic: Great story and all. But the age of the MC makes people hate him. How can a toddler be so lustful and the women who try seduce a little child like that is disgusting not entertaining. If you changed the age of the MC to around 12 then it would be more understandable not a little toddler under 2ft bossing around old men

Potato_Overlord: Feels like a sketch and not a story, idea 5/5, execution 2/5. Feels like a sitcom. Passed me a quick few hours reading through the available chapters.
Protagonist could kill high level assassins with a wail when he was just born on chapter 1 but was absolutely “useless” for the next 35~ chapters.
This story feels more like a release of frustration through writing than a properly thought through novel.

Wataru1974: An OP MC who seem to know too much and getting on everyone’s nerves with his attitudes ; mind you, this is just a little kid giving a ****ty attitude to everyone. I wouldn’t blame any of the other characters wanting to wipe him and his clan out of existence. Seems the story is like parents/guardians of this clan trying to raise and protect this little asswipe and all he does is cause trouble.
Reading this story has been boring and the OP MC just makes you want to turn him over your knee to spank him. Not really much development in this story also pretty dry

Masterbox: Well as proofreader and editor least to say I´m pro novel xD
But as reader myself I think the story has grat potential, it´s the authors first novel so well things always start from somewhere and I think with time will only get better. As for now well MC is still a child, and as we all now which child hasn´t thrown a tantrum or behaves like a little shithead ^^
I love the way the MC is and I can´t w8 how he will develop growing up …..like maybe fall in love, making friends, loosing familymember, remember past, getting knowled about his real human parents , etc…..so let´s ride the bus and hope for a good journey :D!
Author-san keep up the creative work, don´t go dying on me because of exhaustion 😛

 
Story Post Last Updated: March 20, 2019

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