[Story] Monster Integration

Title: Monster Integration
Author: AnWan
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags: Evolution
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 76
Date of First Release: January 15, 2019
Date of Last Update: March 20, 2019
VB Assessment Score: TQ 2   PD 2   CF 2   ||   RL 1   CL 3  ||  Overall: 10
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 980.5 K
Number of Reviews: 52
Synopsis:
In the world where Humans and Monster’s form a bond and fight together, the world where both Evolve together to get stronger.
Walk with Micheal as he starts his adventures with his Silver Sparrow, overcomes countless obstacle and adversaries to fulfill his greatest Dreams.

Review(s)

 

hidden_cloud: Good story to read but the authors first language is not English. Really interesting plot but the first 10 or so chapters are not edited but don’t let that put you off as a editor now fixing the mistakes. Well worth a look if your interested in summoning beasts in a tech world. Looking forward to see how it continues.

Dewranko: The story plot is good, the world background is sufficient enough to provide some ideas on which stage of development it is in. The methods of refining mana is unique, the integration with monsters i believe is lifted from that Demon story thing.
Really, if i wanted to enjoy it more, a fleshier world lore, better character development, and of course, better english writing skills. Currently it is barely at the level of what a Primary 3 student can do, and even I at that age could do what P6s could do.
Really, either you get an editor with better literature and english skills than you do, or you work on your grammar, tenses, and all that good stuff. Or just proofread if you don’t.

passwortknacker: The hideous English used to write this novel is so catastrophic, that it destroys any kind of atmosphere, ******* or interest that it tries really hard to build up. The sad thing is, that I would actually enjoy the story, if the writing style would not make it absolutely unreadable… please get a capable editor, who can actually speak English, as fast as possible.
Story Post Last Updated: March 20, 2019

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