[Story] Eternal Kingdom

Title: Eternal Kingdom
Author: Vgnette
Genre(s): Video Games
Tags:
Audience: G
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 26
Date of First Release: September 18, 2018
Date of Last Update: October 12, 2018
VB Assessment Score: TQ 2   PD 2   CF 1   ||   RL 2   CL 3  ||  Overall: 10
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 173.7 K
Number of Reviews: 6
Synopsis:
The Dive System that lets you experience the wonderful fantasy with your own eyes.
Want to go to the moon? Sure! Fishing on the Arctic? You got it! Or even take a dump on the Himalayas, and becomes a superhero on the next day? We’ll get you covered!
Join the adventure of Yuri Adams, a CEO, a Billionaire and especially a Loving Brother.
Intending to play the critically acclaimed and widely popular VRMMORPG Emperor’s Destiny to fulfill her sister wish. But, instead, he was dragged into a mess that will question his own mortality.

Review(s)

SnoozySloth: Only 1 chapter so far so read this with a grain of salt.
writing Quality: 4/5. It’d be perfect, but the author doesn’t get her/his right and it took me out my reading flow at least 4 times.
Updates: New novel. Can’t judge yet.
Story: 5/5. Sounds like an interesting virtual reality world will soon unfold before us.
Character Design: Both characters are distinct and interesting. Their hair, build, etc. are described well.
World Background: 5/5. We know what world they’re in and where the MC stands in it.
Advice for author: Read up on possessive his/her.
Story Post Last Updated: March 20, 2019

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