[Story] Apex System

Title: Apex System
Author: KingoftheWorld
Genre(s): Eastern Fantasy
Tags: System, XuanHuan, Martial Arts, Romance, Sect-Building, Overpowered Protagonist
Audience: G
Main Lead: Male
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 66
Date of First Release: May 23, 2018
Date of Last Update: November 28, 2018
VB Assessment Score: TQ 3   PD 2   CF 1   ||   RL 2   CL 3  ||  Overall: 11
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 1 M
Number of Reviews: 179
Synopsis:
Hailed as a once-in-a-millennium genius, he was deceived and betrayed.
He lost everything, including his life.
However, Legends never die!
Armed with a system, reaching the apex is but a matter of time.
Follow the story of a legend as he carves an everlasting glory!

Review(s)

why53124: Well I personally like the story but some people were complaining that the pacing was slow because the first 30-45ish chapters he was in the same place however the author did this to build the world and the characters because Mc was recruiting discples and giving us more information on the world which is necessary for a good story .

TheeUnknownSaint: I love that MC is OP and that it’s not cliche but there is no logic in the story. Really jumps the gun every chapter, surely the Writer aware of this too… It just doesn’t feel like I’m reading a novel but a rough draft.
This story probably won’t last long since it’s only been over 10 chapters and it’s already progressed exaggeratedly.

banini: i must say it was a good read. i’ll give this one an excellent review if you talk about world design but is you talk about character well sometime i feel that the ml goes ooc but that just is but it was a very satisfying novel so i give it 3 nice claps just the stability of updates that really make me cringe so thats that

FengYuyi: The story is nice. Although it hasn’t had a nice character development and not much is known about the world. The disciples are too 2D. And there is much interaction between them. And this story doesn’t have BRAIN DEAD character that always pop up every time.

M_A_Illmi: Really like this book. It breaks all rules Opness so if if you wish to read about a superstrong mc that is Intelligent with his choices and not some cliche moron. Recommended that you try it out. and a bit of a bonus.
(He creates a sect)
How could you say no to this novel?

NitrogenousBeing: I read to chapter 26 because of the glowing reviews… but my sense of verisimilitude is constantly broken. I can appreciate skipping tedious tasks for the good stuff, but so far the story is comprised of only skipping. The MC gets the world as a gift without reason and nobody even tries to steal from him. Characters are flawless and bland spending the majority of their time flattering the MC. On the positive side, typos are infrequent and sect building might be interesting in the future.

TheWorldOverHeaven: Apex System stems from a very overused (but lovable) concept the system, yet so far the system has been an asset and tool to the protagonist unlike where most novels the system becomes a crutch. The protagonist is extremely talented and is very overpowered for his age group, but this is not a negative for the story but is in fact a benefit as it removes most cliché plot factors that occur in most novels due to the protagonist’s weakness and fragility. The story seems more focused on the major characters interactions, development and respective adventures and it spends an appropriate amount of time on fleshing out both side and major characters. The fights of the protagonist are not the best due to the his strength however the other character do partake in fights that are rather enjoyable and flow quite well. Overall the novel is a nice read if you don’t want to be reading something with lots of drama and an overly cliché protagonist or storyline.

soulshocker: Great novel but I feel the plot development is too fast so pls can you slow it down a notch with a little more in depth development and also when he is giving out techniques and weapons (even though it means nothing to him) he shouldn’t give it out casually they should work for it so that they would know the value of it and also the romance is rushed what the hell is there meeting was by fate and then after that you like each other and she becomes your wife…. Generally the novel is great but the plot feels rushed and isn’t going in depth with the development, it would be a lot better if the author takes his time to build the plot and not rush them… also GET WELL SOON AUTHOR

 
Story Post Last Updated: March 20, 2019

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