[Story] A Superior Being Will Always Rise … Even If They’re A Goblin

Title: A Superior Being Will Always Rise … Even If They’re A Goblin
Author: JustaMob
Genre(s): Fantasy
Tags:
Audience: PG
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1   CDD 1   SWB 2   || TQ 3   SV 2   ||  Overall: 9
Number of Chapters: 52
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: March 2, 2019
Date of Last Update: April 19, 2019
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 166.2K
Number of Reviews: 7
Synopsis:
Jellal is a man who’s been reincarnated as lowly goblin. While an average person may fall into despair upon being reborn as a goblin, a superior being (self titled) like Jellal’s rise to greatness could never be stopped by something so trivial.

Review(s)

DragonTreasures: Leaving you a review! To be honest, I’m still reviewing many of the parts of your story, and hope you continue to improve as i read through more of it! However, I think it has a strong foundation, and perhaps more dialog would help improve the story?
One recommendation, try and use stronger adjectives and shorter sentences when writing your chapters.

Story Post Last Updated: October 6, 2020

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