[Story] Convincing her (Jen & Lucas)

Title: Convincing her (Jen & Lucas)
Author: Carlyssa
Genre(s): Romance Fiction
Tags:
Audience: NC-17
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 55
Date of First Release: January 31, 201
Date of Last Update: March 18, 2019
VB Assessment Score: TQ 2   PD 2   CF 2   ||   RL 1   CL 3  ||  Overall: 10
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 65.7 K
Number of Reviews: 12
Synopsis:
After pulling a disappearing act with her family, Jen relocated and tried living a normal life, making normal friends as she decided to continue with university. After falling out of love with her ex she wasn’t exactly looking for a new relationship until she had a drunken encounter with a man that was later very determined to pursue her.

Review(s)

LizB08: The chemistry between Jen and Lucas has me enthralled. Love the way the story is developing. I especially like the way Jen’s character has been penned, different from the cliched FLs. Keep them comin’

fantasy_land: Another romance story worth reading! If you want fluffy cute scenes of romance in between day, I suggest you could try this one.
The plot is good and developing slowly. Keeps the readers wanting for more. There are a few grammatical errors here & there but this story is too engrossing to make you notice it.
Personally, I think you should use a more bright cover for attracting readers. But then again it’s my personal opinion.
Keep writing👍

niharikabhol: A very detailed romantic story. Well if you are not of age then I would strongly suggest to avoid it. But it’s an amazing read for adults. The way you have potrayed the lead character image is really commendable. One can actually feel like things are happening in front of them and like you know that characters from the way author has written. Since it’s just the beginning, I am not going to comment much on other aspects as I am yet to explore them.
Overall rating – must add to the library.
Keep writing.

CailinMatthews: I have to admit that when I read the title, the synopsis and the opening chapters, I thought it was going to be a dominant vs stubborn female type of thing.
For this, I’m sorry, author. I was wrong.
The story is actually started pretty normal minus the backgrounds these characters have which is nice because all people are human. It doesn’t matter if a person is a prodigy or a genius, we all connect.
The romance is cute and realistic. I love a fantasy/daydream romance as much as the next person but it’s the realistic ones that have lessons in them. All stories do but sometimes the little things are overlooked.
This had both which is truly satisfying.
The characters are interesting enough. I can’t say much because it’s as if we get to know them as they get to know each other which seems to form a major plot of the book.
And I am here for it.
It’s easy to get into a relationship—espeically these days but using your head and not only your heart can be a challenge. I love a level-headed character. It’s such a breath of fresh air.
That’s pretty much it.
The only critique I have is to cut some corners. The descriptive narrative is good but not everything is needed to said down to the last detail. 😉
Good luck on your journey!

zetsubouaichan: This is definitely a light romance read. I enjoyed reading about Jen and Lucas’ relationship. The writing flow nicely and the pacing was good.
At the current chapter, there was not much drama going on. Although I expect that there will be drama, later on, I hope that it wouldn’t be too dramatic.

malyaa6485782929: Guys give it a try. This story is very interesting with a lot of untold things that makes you want to read more. Jen is quite unstable and lucas knows what he wants thats shortly the main characteristics of the protagonists. The autor is very focused and downoads every week a couple of chapters. I’m sure you will like it readers. Don’t forget to encourage the author!!!

BAJJ: Writing Quality: The writing quality is good there was no jarring moments so far. I have no complaints there.
Stability update: CONSISTENT!! great job there!
Story Development: although, I’m still at the early chapter, there were questions lingered on my mind as I’m reading it which reeled me in instantly. also, the pace of how our ML and FL did the deed is really… encouraging?
Character Design: The character design is superb! MC is cool. ML is hot af. they felt real.
World Background: 5 star. no words needed.
Overall, the novel is great and made me wanted to savor every chapter without missing a few points. also, the chapters doesn’t look that long as it was a fun read. This is what I am seeking for in the forums! Powerstones for you!
**. this is recommended for readers who are sick and tired of virgin MC’s. that’s all.

 
Story Post Last Updated: March 18, 2019

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