[Story] The System User in Another World

Title: The System User in Another World
Author: Luisyfer
Genre(s): Fantasy
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1   CDD 1   SWB 1   || TQ 2   SV 1   ||  Overall: 6
Number of Chapters: 29
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: January 26, 2019
Date of Last Update: February 19, 2019
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 664.3K
Number of Reviews: 15
Jay Silvers is just your average Otaku, but blessed in handsomeness. While he was out buying novels he happens in an accident where he save a little girl. In the final moment of his life, the only thought running through his mind was
‘I want to be like those MC in novels who Transmigrate or something’
But he didn’t know that because he save the little girl, that would be his ticket to start his adventure in Another World.


Lycaeus: Great novel, the writing style is very coherent, the flow of the story is smooth, this has a lot of potential.
On a personal note, no offense intended, but i’d rather if you minimize certain aspects such as the fact of the MC, being a lolicon(im no lolicon), and be more logical, with him having the gamer’s mind, it has always been a plot hole that was never addressed, because the gamer’s mind forces or makes one a calm logical bastard, not a childish dick for brains idiot.
I will continue to read it still though because you are a good writer. ( I hope you will not get offended with my review )

Story Post Last Updated: October 17, 2020


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