[Story] The System User in Another World

Title: The System User in Another World
Author: Luisyfer
Genre(s): Fantasy
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Audience:
Main Lead: Male
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 1   CDD 1   SWB 1   || TQ 2   SV 1   ||  Overall: 6
Number of Chapters: 29
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: January 26, 2019
Date of Last Update: February 19, 2019
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 664.3K
Number of Reviews: 15
Synopsis:
Jay Silvers is just your average Otaku, but blessed in handsomeness. While he was out buying novels he happens in an accident where he save a little girl. In the final moment of his life, the only thought running through his mind was
‘I want to be like those MC in novels who Transmigrate or something’
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But he didn’t know that because he save the little girl, that would be his ticket to start his adventure in Another World.

Review(s)

Lycaeus: Great novel, the writing style is very coherent, the flow of the story is smooth, this has a lot of potential.
On a personal note, no offense intended, but i’d rather if you minimize certain aspects such as the fact of the MC, being a lolicon(im no lolicon), and be more logical, with him having the gamer’s mind, it has always been a plot hole that was never addressed, because the gamer’s mind forces or makes one a calm logical bastard, not a childish dick for brains idiot.
I will continue to read it still though because you are a good writer. ( I hope you will not get offended with my review )

Story Post Last Updated: October 17, 2020

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