[Story] Limerence

Title: Limerence
Author: Kimmyah
Genre(s): Romance Fiction
Tags:
Audience: G
Main Lead: Female
Status: Ongoing
Number of Chapters: 23
Date of First Release: April 21, 2018
Date of Last Update: January 8, 2019
VB Assessment Score: TQ 2   PD 1   CF 2   ||   RL 1   CL 2  ||  Overall: 8
VB Reviewed? No
Number of Views: 64.6 K
Number of Reviews: 9
Synopsis:
Luisa Smith and Gabriel Smith are sought-after figures in the field of accounting and finance. They have their own accounting firms and most of their clients are known figures in politics, business and other different fields.
Due to their outstanding capability together with their clients’ background, Luisa and Gabriel are facing threats every day, it became a normal occurrence for them, but it changed when Luisa got pregnant with twins. They got afraid that something may happen to their children, so they made it a secret.
She asked the help of their clients to make her pregnancy as a secret. In the end, her children lived peacefully and enjoyed their life inside the four corners of their home. When the threats stopped coming, she let her children go outside their home and start living their lives as a normal teen.
With their parent’s connections, it was easy for the twins to get in a university even though they lack some important documents. To have less trouble, the twins decided not to attend the same school, Alex Louisse were the one who got in university first. On the other hand, Alex Gabriella was still waiting for the university’s feedback.
Alex don’t have a problem with mingling with other people, so it was easy for her to adapt with the changes. On the other hand, Gabby is not doing well, she can adapt with the changes but because of her personality, she’s having a tough time interacting with other people.
Unexpectedly, the twins happened to fall in love with the same guy or that’s what they thought and because of that, the twins started to face some difficulties in their life.
The question is…
Do they really fall in love with the same guy? and
Will they have the strength to succeed in overcoming their problems?

Review(s)

Illmizz: Chapter 18__] So far the story is evening out and giving more detail into the circumstances of the leads and those around her. Great story for those new or used to romance types. Give support to author as she is very brave to do this and share it with us. Can’t wait to see what she comes up and surprise us all…

meipin: a great novel for its genre.
it is an extremely sweet novel that is pleasant to read if you aren’t in the mood for something heavy.
i’m so thankful that i have found it here because i have already loved this novel.

Jaegeral: First of all, let me start off by saying that this is my first time reading a novel with a female as a protagonist, so good job on baiting me, fellow author.
The story has a solid plot. The characters personalities also touch upon the realm of 3D, a difficult feat to achieve.
But the grammar and punctuation would need a bit of work. I hope that you study the correct use of past perfect tense. Some sentences were awkward to read. For example:
“All the guests were very satisfied with the party, they all have fun. ” (Prologue)
You should substitute the ‘have’ with ‘had’:
“All the guests were very satisfied with the party, they all had fun. ”
This example above uses the past perfect construction to refer to a past reaction (they had fun) that occurred before another past reaction (they felt satisfied).
Anyway, the story was quite enjoyable. Keep up the good work.
Cheers!
Story Post Last Updated: March 18, 2019

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