[Story] I Remember Love

Title: I Remember Love
Author: pandamonium (formerly pandamathers)
Genre(s): Romance Fiction
Tags: Harem, Modern, Action, R-18
Audience: NC-17
Main Lead: Female
Status: Hiatus/Dropped
VB Assessment Score: PDE 2 CDD 2 SWB 1 || TQ 2 SV 2 || Overall: 9
Number of Chapters: 58
Chapter Length: Medium
Reading Level: Low
Date of First Release: January 30, 2019
Date of Last Update: June 1, 2020
VB Reviewed? No
Available on Platform(s): Webnovel
Number of Views: 161.3K
Number of Reviews: 9
Synopsis:
A teenage girl transforms herself into a teenage boy in order to avenge her father’s death. Amalia is a young teenage girl whose life is thrown into chaos with the death of her father. Having been raised in a single parent home her world is shattered with his death. Many months later she sent to live with her Grandfather in the far away outskirts of a city called Arcadia.
Not only is she uprooted from her home and school but her life is completely flipped around. The once gentle and amiable girl seems to change overnight in a rebellious teenager with a hunger for revenge. Disguising herself as a man she infiltrates the city’s toughest most notorious gang in order to find the men who killed her father.
Finding revenge will Amalia be able to once more return to her normal life? OR in her quest for vengeance will she be found out and perhaps discover something more?

Review(s)

AvlyDarkz: This story is full of action, fast pace and deliciously exciting. Leaving you anticipating what will happen next. Can’t wait.If you into gangs, genderbending, revenge and maybe what I feel might be a surprise for little more I hope expectantly this is story for you check it out.

VioletLily: Constructive Criticism: (I tried my best as I’ve never done anything like this before) (It’s just what I think)
The plot of the story is very good. It’s very immersive and gives me the feels. It sometimes makes me want to cry and that’s a good thing. (I think) There are many errors in writing though. They use the wrong words and would sometimes miss out on a few words in a sentence that would make it flow better or just a few words at the end of the sentence that would make it a full complete sentence that has its thoughts fully written out. I’m not really sure about the world backround though. We don’t know that country, state, city, town or whatever world they’re in. Is it someplace real? Or is it an alternate world that is similar to Earth but not? We need names. I kinda read this all in like less than two days so I’m not sure of the update stability and so I just put a 5/5 for that.The character designs are pretty good too. That’s all I have to say. You might want to get a proof reader just in case. It’s not that bad, like I know what you mean and can fill in the blanks but it’s not super good either. If this makes you mad then I’m sorry. This story has a lot of potential but the writing errors ruin it a bit for me. I’m still going to read it though.
WQ:3/5. SU: 5/5. SD:5/5. CD: 5/5. WB: 1/5

Story Post Last Updated: October 22, 2020

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